For A Demo, Very Strong
I saw your PM and couldn't pass an opportunity to listen to the song! The melody is very good, catchy, the instruments complement each other and it comes on strong. A previous reviewer mentioned structure and I would think this type of song be good with an intro-verse-chorus-outro sort of deal. That way it isn't the same melody throughout the whole song making it much less repetitive. Other than that everything is really strong and tight, that beat is just awesome. Try changing the beat up during the chorus so it helps break the repetition. Great song and can't wait to hear the final version!
~VNSTUDIOS~